Extremely engaging from the start. With good story tellers I forget every thing around me and that is how this storey reads for me. Thank you foe writing.
I am digging this. You have a very unique style and a smooth flow to your words... good job
I like your writing style and your descriptions and details...great job on this first chapter and I hope you write more soon
I love it (: Its very different, but i know you and you ARE different (: Ahhh! Its great! You better not stop this one anytime soon!
Oh wow, this is really amazing. The cover is gorgeous, and a very unique plot! Although slightly creepy for my tastes, you get my vote :)
This was so different, so unique, not to mention the creepiness about it. It made me shiver. I love the different names. :) voted.
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