I love the way its starts. Dramatic yet enough to draw the reader in effectivly. Well done!
I like the description in this. it's well written and leaves it on a cliffhanger which is good.
Wow, now I know what you mean by very descriptive! I loved it, especially the part about the shadows and the full moon. XD
This is really good so far I love it! The cover is actually epic and very good description! :)
AMAZING LAST LINE! Perfect description, no mistakes, spectacular mystery and it held a nice eerie feeling. Two thumbs up! *Aplaud*
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