Holly's World.
Holly's world was perfect until her parents decided they needed to move from rural Nebraska to busy California so her father can get medical treatment for his cancer. Holly feels her life has been turned upside down. She writes in her diary to vent her feelings about moving because she cant show any anger towards her parents. When holly moves to California she becomes new neighbors to the most popular boy at Rosedale High Nathan (Nate) Bauchman. suddenly Holly becomes obsessed with Nate and starts to fall in love with him not for his out of this world good looks but for his amazingly perfect personality. (the looks are just a bonus!!!!) But Holly feels she has no chance of getting any closer to Nate then their current status neighbors nothing more nothing less. But holly doesnt know just whats coming her way.
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This was kind of a telltale but im sure that the rest wont be. I liked the inserted personalitly. Nicely done.
I really liked the story. I think the idea is original and the description is really good. voted:)
this seems more like a prologue but it looked a bio too. It had good description but it seemed a little off at some points, but I liked it
I think it is a bit choppy. You need some commas and what not. But the discription is there and I think you're heading in the right direction.
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