Wow I liked this. Was he able to carry all 5 bags because of the training he does?
Good descriptions so far. A lot of people don't pay attention to that, especially in the beginning but you did a really nice job. :)
great dialoge, and description. I like how everything flowed so nicely! It was a great read so far :) voted.
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| Name | Daezy |
| Location | Indiana |
| Birthday | Jul 02 |
| Member Since | Apr 09, 2011 |
| Votes Received | 152 |