Cynthia, another good chapter! Well done!! Voted!!!!! :)
Paragraph 7 on the first page of chapter 3, ''tey'' should be ''they'' ??
here because of your article on Huffington Post- this is a brilliant first chapter. I wish i had your courage to put my work up !
I love the voice of your character it's so real and I love it already! you are very talented!
I love the style, I love the voice you have as a writer it just flows so beautifully and I am hooked. This is fantastic, well done. I look forward to more!
I love your character's voice! I couldn't wait. I just had to sneak in and read some of this even though I wanted to wait until it was all finished.
That was crazy! Colton has experienced in one day what most have to wait a lifetime for. The dance was so true to form. Perfect.
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