Educational Experience

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CynthiaDagnal-Myron By CynthiaDagnal-Myron Updated 2 days ago
He was the "Cinderfella" story of the century: a homeless waif who inherited the fortune of the world's richest adult entertainment tycoon. But when he's sent back to high school as a condition of probation, he meets a disillusioned teacher who takes his mind off all of his Webcam fantasy femmes.
rskovach rskovach 2 months ago
Oh my goodness, Cynthia! I'm only three paragraphs in and I'm already in love with the voice and am grinning from ear to ear. Bravo!
TallSammLim TallSammLim 6 months ago
Channeling an inner sex kitten for romance is clearly easier than releasing a hot, bad dude who's self made, self aware, and a dude!! The story still blows my mind.
TallSammLim TallSammLim 6 months ago
Incredibly raw, so much within the simple exercise of returning to school and meeting with the principle first. I had to remind myself that you're a female author, to nail such masculine dialogue is very impressive ;)
AlejandraP1990 AlejandraP1990 7 months ago
@CynthiaDagnal-Myron hahaha i 1000% agree with you about breaking the law!! but my problem is grammar so i'm breaking the language XD!

Don´t worry about the accent, we (and by we, i mean all spanish people) have a lot of mistakes with that, but i guess if i can help you i'll gladly do it!! ;)
SamanthaSLK SamanthaSLK 8 months ago
This is everything a first chapter should be. It grabs the reader's attention from the start. I really liked the array of colourful characters and their dialogue was very realistic.
AaronRubicon AaronRubicon 8 months ago
This is a really great opening. Instantly engrossing; extremely vivid with tremendous energy and a lively voice. I am not just voting for this chapter, I'm voting the sh!t out of this chapter.