Educational Experience

39 Part Story 11.7K Reads 326 Votes
CynthiaDagnal-Myron By CynthiaDagnal-Myron Updated 15 hours ago
He was the Cinderella story of the century: a homeless waif who inherited the fortune of one of the richest porn purveyors on the planet. But when he's sent back to high school as a condition of probation, he meets a disillusioned teacher who takes his mind off all of his Webcam fantasy femmes.
rskovach rskovach 17 days ago
Oh my goodness, Cynthia! I'm only three paragraphs in and I'm already in love with the voice and am grinning from ear to ear. Bravo!
TallSammLim TallSammLim 5 months ago
Channeling an inner sex kitten for romance is clearly easier than releasing a hot, bad dude who's self made, self aware, and a dude!! The story still blows my mind.
TallSammLim TallSammLim 5 months ago
Incredibly raw, so much within the simple exercise of returning to school and meeting with the principle first. I had to remind myself that you're a female author, to nail such masculine dialogue is very impressive ;)
AlejandraP1990 AlejandraP1990 6 months ago
@CynthiaDagnal-Myron hahaha i 1000% agree with you about breaking the law!! but my problem is grammar so i'm breaking the language XD!

Don´t worry about the accent, we (and by we, i mean all spanish people) have a lot of mistakes with that, but i guess if i can help you i'll gladly do it!! ;)
SamanthaSLK SamanthaSLK 6 months ago
This is everything a first chapter should be. It grabs the reader's attention from the start. I really liked the array of colourful characters and their dialogue was very realistic.
AaronRubicon AaronRubicon 7 months ago
This is a really great opening. Instantly engrossing; extremely vivid with tremendous energy and a lively voice. I am not just voting for this chapter, I'm voting the sh!t out of this chapter.