Awesome! I love the description and the ideas of wolves!!!! huge Jacob Black fan lol
Very good. It's interesting to be reading in the POV of a dog. . . sorry wolf! :) 'm going to keep reading on
wow thz iz really AWSOME when u mentioned the grl in the red hood i thoght it was sorta gunna b lyk a red riding hood stry :) UPLOAD SOON:) X
I LIKE IT ESPECIALLY CUZ ALL THE WOLF STORIES IVE READ THEY ALMOST ALWAYS MEET WHEN THEY ARE HUMA SO THIS WAS A GOOD CHANGE
You say her pale skin glistened in the sun and then you say she has tanned legs.. that may look a little weird having a pale face and tanned legs. lol
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