nice story!!!.:) your dead!...coz the the little girl kill you?...something like that?..
Wow it grabbed me just like legend. I am hoping you do write more! Legend is wonderful also!!!
My sincere congratulations! I loved the plot and your attitude! Greetings from greece! :)
Swell stuff. But if you died in the end (well, I believe the 'I' in the story is you), then what's the point commenting. Nice stuff, anyways.
I LOVED IT SO MUCH IVE READ IT 9 TIMES NOW AND IVE VOTED FOR IT AND ITS ON MY READING LIST AS FAVOURITES !!!!!
UNEXPECTED!!!! I almost cried in the middle of the book because the abusiveness actually happens and sometimes it could be worse... What a great story.
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