I like it! i like how the plot is a bit different from what i normally read. you write well too (: so i voted!
Lol..I luv how she meets zayn and when he asks her to drop her off to her house she says yes!
Are you from denmark? :D. I am from Esbjerg in Denmark, so it's a bit funny to see a story about a Danish girl:D
That was a great start! Wonderful descriptions :) There are a couple of grammar/spelling mistakes, but a quick edit can fix that. Love it!
Hey nice beginning. I like your descriptions. Youre very descriptive. I like it. I hope i could meet zayn!
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