Wow Nice start... i like how you structured it at the beginning as well :) keep it up!
I almost feel sorry 4 him. ALMOST! Ha! I luv the structure u definatly have a unique style. I'm a fan
Hmm...I like the idea. I like the begining. I can smell the drama thats gonna be coming. lol Good job! :)
wow you've made him both egotistical and narcissistic its nice that you've totally got the character down to a T..very well done!
Wow, this is really good and well written!! :D I've gotta read more - you have me hooked!
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| Name | Prescil |
| Location | England |
| Birthday | Jun 25 |
| Member Since | May 12, 2010 |
| Votes Received | 1,035 |