This was a really beautiful poem.....it reminded me of what it means to say goodbye. Amazing! :D
Nice! I love the way you expressed the emotion so strong to be felt by barely reading it !! <3 it!!!
U are too good with words....i mean u can pour the feelings n emotions in words so easily,,,,wish i had this talent....loved it :-)
Wow, I love this and how it expresses the emotions so easily. Very well wrote. :)
I felt the emotions you wanted us to feel. Such a beautiful, strong poem. Keep it up! :)
Aw this was so sweet, so heartaching. Very well done too. Wonderful imagery. Good job
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