is this really the end? i was expecting more. there are a lot of unfinished business here. i hope there are still more chapters of this story.
hey a very fresh story... awaiting an update at the earliest.... great work, good luck nd god bless... :-)
Heya, another Aussie. Brilliant, your style is so real. I only wish i could make soap operas sound that good.
You write beautifully. Far better than I do. But I'm still working on it. :) Going to keep reading.
Great chapter! Just a little tip... you use the word "said" almost every time there's a line of dialogue. Maybe you should switch it up a little? :)
I started reading your story 2 days ago. It is awesome!! I LOVE IT! Update soon :)
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