I love how there's a theme with the two birds. This is so dark. The repetition is perfect.
Wow, that was really good.
I love the way you wrote everything! Just love it!
@zebralou i think it's awesome as it is. :) (sorry it took me so long to reply. i didn't realize i had to refresh the page...)
:O dude. this. is. awesome. like i said before, i LOVE how you're, like, so cryptic and everything sounds so... well, poetic! :D
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