Oh and I know you put that it won't be edited until it's finished but I can' help it :), blame my sister
very interesting start. I like the way how you say "those blue eyes will haunt me one day" makes the guy sound really ....haunted/wanted/hot , great job :)
This was great! Carleigh and Brooke are so cute and they aren't even together yet lol! I thought this was very well written and good job!
THis. IS. GREAT! I Am Sooo glad I read this! I willow be reading on laters! And I also love your cover! it has... pazaz!
Great prologue, love the detail and it easily introduces the story to the reader. Keep it up :-)
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