i liked the report in the beginning really interesting way to start the story. good start. voted.
Great start! The news report was a good idea and I like the difference in characters. :)
This is a very different (in a good way) story with some interesting characters. It's off to a nice start. I like it so far and can't wait to read on :D
Awesome start!! I love it!!! I love how unique and different the characters are!!
This is okay. I like the idea, but there's a lot of mistakes - with punctuation and dialogue. Be sure to put punctuation with every dialogue passage.
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