Avenging Angel

13 Part Story 1.3K Reads 83 Votes
Barbiedoll1 By Barbiedoll1 Updated 2 years ago
Would you rather be: (A) A loner; (B) A person with many friends who actually don't like you; (C) A person with true friends???

Kiara Bose has always categorised herself in the third option but fate has chosen something else for her!

Living in a world of illusion created by her friends, she has always been happy until a black spell was caste upon her life!

Unaware of a way to break out of the spell and bring her doomed life back to normal, Kiara tries a thousand ways.

Would fate force her to end up under option (A) or she will be able to find a way out and fight back with the help of her boyfriend  and a mystery caller and ravel the mystery behind!
BlurryWords BlurryWords 2 years ago
I liked this chapter. I really like your plot line, it's very interesting. I'd suggest maybe adding a bit more description in just to really set the scene. Your dialogue was good though, believably written. Overall, good start.
RashiManaktala RashiManaktala 3 years ago
its a nyc story srishti... d point of views are amazing... m waiting for ur entire story..