i don't usually read fan fictions but you started this really well. I like your writing style XD it's really hooking. Good job! Voted!
This is great so far. I love the fact you feel like you are on stage with her. It was great really involving. Well done :) x
1D isn't really my thing, but pretty well-written, and the character interaction is good.
Interesting story. I feel like I'm missing something from not reading the other story, but all in all good read.. voted
In sorry but this just won't be as good as baby tommo. I cannot believe that the baby died that was so sad.
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