Why She Can't Leave Herself
She turned five during the night and went back to her normal 16 years old self in the day. Yes, like every fairy tale the 'curse' would break only if she started to love someone(and admit it) and that someone loved her back. The sad sad thing was... She had a horrible attitude that kept everyone away from her. Rude and downright disrespectful was an understatement. Another fact, she didnt know that her mind was going through that process. when it became ten o'clock in the night she just-snap- changed to her innocent child mind! And the next morning, again -snap- she goes back to her manly,rude self that everyone hated. One last fact, everyday 10 minutes was taken away from her 16 year old self. Meaning that the next time, she turned to her child like self 10 minutes earlier than the day before. If it was ten, the next day would be 9:50. So in 6 days, she would transform a full hour earlier and it would continue until she turned completely to her child self. Unless she finds herself a lover, she wont escape from this 'curse'. Will Evaline be able to break the curse before it's too late?
Let the spell begin.
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GuitarPlayer101
The intro of the story is nice and captivating! I like the way you describe your character's movement in the story! Very nice! ~
great start, your descriptions are really good! Story captures the readers attention though the bullying is a bit brief, detail is crucial!
Wow, she has a really strong and harsh character. Makes me wonder what made her that way. Cool.
That's horribel how they singled her out. e.e I would hate for that to happen. This is pretty well written, didn't catch any mistake.s
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