Again, I love the way this reads aloud. Not only do you build something profound but it's a pleasure to LISTEN too as well as HEAR! Beautiful work!
This is beautiful... I think it is actually at par with those of poets like Frost..
Wonderful write Olan, I especially love your last stanza ."Your strength is dreadful" is an outstanding line in my opinion.
Olan you weild your pen as if a light saber cutting away all bindings to those still darken niches we harbor...a valiant, freeing, and emboldened write. ;`)
a poem from your heart and soul . loved the use of the new words .Great poem Marie
@CottonJones - no need to reword Olan, I love learning new words. Educe is a lovely word and fits the poem perfectly.
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