Skin Deep

Science Fiction: A few years into the future and Google has taken over administration of cities leading to a drop in crime. Even the Google police however are struggling to find a piece of equipment stolen from an experimental dermatologist. Detective Stanley is sent in to try and extract some information from the eccentric Dr. Romanov and his more grounded assistant. Will he manage to track down the thief or will he come to realise that appearance truly is only Skin Deep?

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Recent Comments

so creative, great mad scientist character.  Dialogue and plot well crafted and tight.  Loved your touches of humour, of course. ~)K

knightwriter

Nice story. Reminds me of "The Stolen Bacillus" by HG Wells (gutenberg ebooks 12750).

BobbyMorris83

I liked it. A bit predictible at the end, but I enjoyed reading it.
I gave you a vote.

deYan_

The plot structure feels a bit weak, but as a single scene it's witty and well-thought out. Well done :)

raindropsfall

Very entertaining!  I couldn't help wondering though if the burglar remembered to take his headgear off during the full body treatment ...!!

elveloy

@TheOrangutan i would probably change the name to whoogle or allude to a brand in some way. Whilst it isnt important to the story , it's still a nice touch.