i like your style of writing, and so far is really interesting. I cant believe her just took her phone just like that
I like it! It had a nice suspense and descriptions. I like your paragraphs to ha they're very "chunky" ish :)
So far I like it! The pacing is nice, and its easy to read. Also yay descriptions!!! lol too many stories are lacking them lately.
This was really good, I hate going shopping with my mom because she always rushes me! >.< Amway good details, and saw no errors.
I really like your style of writing n this story. You have a great plot line, to go along with your amazing use of words.
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