Such a good idea, cute beginning, colorful characters, but your structure could use a little work (everyone's could, really, including my own)
Obviously Winston and Hannah are going to end up together. Awesome prologue by the way:D I'm gonna loveeee this story:)
I only started reading this because Candice Swanepoel is on the cover. She's the best thing ever.
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