DAMN! I got to it as you chopped it down! *sigh* - - I'll pre-order then, I guess... :P
Okay -- now I am back commenting over here, I'll try not to repeat myself :) I love the scene with the lady/demon -- a simple but effective twist!
Quite the start! I like the way you describe the use of magic. It always seems hard to do right, but you did. :)
Is this book finished?? I need to read this it is SOOO GOOD ur awesome keep writing!!
Oh! That was classic. The innocent girl facade played really well. Almost at the level of Wilbur Smith. Splendid.
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