Ooh yay!!! I really love this type of story, so I'm excited to read the rest :) I love the imagery and it's a fantastic start :)
"Alright, can you make sure Dusty comes a lot?" - i don't understand? comes to new Zealand?
okay wait - how does one "invade" the other's aura and how would he convert into a "mindless servant"? is this like a mystical story? lol
love the cast! You should check out the story "uncommon common magic" i think you'd like it.
I like it. Nice start. This is different from all the stories I have read. The plot is great. Good Job!
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| Name | Rae |
| Location | The borderline of insanity and genius. |
| Member Since | Sep 13, 2010 |
| Votes Received | 46 |