Thanks for showing me this!! Its really good!! I will read the rest later but im excited!
wow interesting so far, love how you can say a lot in so little. your description really shows the audience what the book is about which is good. voted :)
There were like 3 times you didn't capitalize, but thats the only mistakes I saw. I thought it was honestly a great start.
I really like it so far, a little bit of work needed on sentence structure but besides that it is really good!
Michael- IT IS KATIE!!! Yeah i guess i was too busycommenting to let u knnow who it was... sorry if i creeped u out :)
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