This is very good! You have a great way with words that is very gripping and easy to read. I like it!
wow. your writing is very distributive . I can SEE what you are writing. It is so sad about her parents. going onto the next chap- voted
It was good and i look forward to reading more when i have time.I'm interested to see who the murderer is. keep writing!
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