My Kind of Perfect (One Shot)

1 Part Story 795 Reads 17 Votes
modernongbettyboop By modernongbettyboop Completed
What happens when an aniticipated happy occassion turns in to a nightmare?
She was waiting for him will all her heart. He was looking for excuses to break the bad news to her.
"I know he’s been coming home quite late recently because of a project which is due soon. But he promised to be home sooner today"......Gail
"I know we promised each other to keep no secrets but I have faltered on that promise as well, and for that I hope one day you can forgive me".... Aaron
JenCutTheCrap JenCutTheCrap 5 months ago
I think I might be a wicked witch 

Because this made me cry and I'm melting
JenCutTheCrap JenCutTheCrap 5 months ago
 seriously? That's the sin? Wtf!

I thought he was going to say he cheated and either got a std or had a love child.
mizsuitandtie mizsuitandtie 2 years ago
It's amazing! How that guy really values the importnt thngs of hs wife.. Ths is gorgeous! :>
cpblade13 cpblade13 2 years ago
I teach at the college level, and, sad to say, you write in English better than many that have been speaking it all their lives. Good job!
Llamadillo5 Llamadillo5 3 years ago
Awe! So adorable! I just have a few things to say and one is it is broach not brooch. Anyways, that was a great story and you just made my day. I am going to look and see if you have anymore stories for me toread. Loved the story so much it just warms up my heart. (:
xmeimeix xmeimeix 3 years ago
i think the story is cute. it was a perfect situation, way too perfect.  the way you write is ok, few gramm errors, but i'm sure u can fix them. i suggest you read more english novels and write more english pieces just so you can get the hang of it. u shud write more! =)