amazing, the rhythem and rhyme are brilliant, it has a sort of flow that gives an innocence yet the words are so tragic.
This is really nice. You rhyme well with deep meaning. I look forward to reading more of your works. Cheers
Wow!! It's really smooth and the rhymes aren't forced. I really love the meaning of it too! It's seriously really good :D Keep writing, you're good at it :):)
really sad but almost comforting in a way.. its strange and really good! great job! voted!
This is amazing! The mood is sad, but it's kinda soft at the same time. And the rhyme and rhythm is incredible. I adore this poem! :) ~Voted.
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