Simply put this is beautiful. As a writer you transported the reader into the story allowing that emotional connection with your characters. Well done!
So sweet...your personal experience really brings this to life! Very touching, and I voted (':
cries* this was emotional
im not used to reading n 2nd person so i was a bit weird but love reading new things
the second person writing threw me off guard- I love it when I find something new.
This blew my mind, second person! Don't see that everyday haha. Awww this was really cute but in an emotionally sad way :) good work!
Aww, that was sad :(
This is the third story written in second person that I have ever read in my entire life and I loved it! The was seriously awesome ;)
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