The Dark

Tal lives across a field from a girl named Marley. Marely lives next to the city's largest train tracks and a boy named Tal. Tal has a dark secret, Marley knows what it is, and the only thing that keeps them grounded is the vibrations of oncoming trains as the two of them lie against the coarse ground in the field.
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I love this as a short story. It's sad and horrible, but you execute it well. What was the part about the girl being too far away to hear?
I was drawn into these characters, their honesty and connection. It sounds like a concept that you could develop into a full novel if you wanted to!


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