Oh wow. This was a good surprise. Didn't regret adding it to my RL. You're good, and a story written in a male's perspective is a breath of fresh air. <3
This is so good, had me doubting with the title but I'm glad i started reading this! Great flow! So realistic! Love it!
Love it, I love stories like this written in a male's perspective as well. Already added to my reading list and voting. =)
I really like how it draws you in even from the first page! The way you used dialogue made it really relatable.
A good start for an introduction. You have a good range of vocal :D Reading onward :D
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| Name | Max Lancaster |
| Location | Wherever the food is |
| Birthday | Jun 11 |
| Member Since | Mar 10, 2012 |
| Votes Received | 4,909 |