I can't deal with this. I can't deal with a vicious BSDM vampire named Chuck, and his whiny slave Blair. I can't do it.
Chuck? Could u give him a more sophisticated name? Like Blake? Chuck makes me think of an old fat guy.
cant stand the name chuck sounds very bland also i was looking forward to getting some saucy details but no action i really like the book but want intamcy
There are quite a lot of grammatical and spelling errors. Perhaps you should proof read your work before posting.
really good!! this guy is a jerk!! i love the story but i suggest u get en editor or proofread your story before posting there was a lot of errors
While I am going to enjoy this story I think, I do want to ask, is English your first language, no offence but I kind of get the feeling it isn't.
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