Witch, Raped, Captured, tortured, Slave, Master, Rojal, Love, Vampire
Poor girl! I know exactly how she feels about what her father did to her sexually because I was sexually molested as a teenager. Your choice of words to descrive everything is perfect.
There are quite a lot of grammatical and spelling errors. Perhaps you should proof read your work before posting.
really good!! this guy is a jerk!! i love the story but i suggest u get en editor or proofread your story before posting there was a lot of errors
While I am going to enjoy this story I think, I do want to ask, is English your first language, no offence but I kind of get the feeling it isn't.
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