Alpha Mate?
Mel was perfect in Jo’s eyes. She had perfect curly brown hair he wanted to run his fingers through. Her perfect green eyes and brilliant white smile that could light up any room captivated him. Any time he would dare to hug her, her perfect petite curvy body fit into his perfectly. As he sat across from her and his sister, her eyes finally caught his stare. Perfect chills went down his spine as she smirked, amusement shining in her eyes. She was untouchable. She was something he could never have. She, Mellissa Rose Young was his little sister’s best friend. He catches her looking at him….GOD…completely and utterly unattainable.
Mel let out a longing sigh. She tried to act normal, she really did. Never the less it was becoming harder and harder to pretend that she wasn’t jealous when Jo’s girlfriend was brought up, that she didn’t want to find a dagger and plunge it into her heart every time she saw them kiss, and that she wasn’t completely and uncontrollably in love with him. Maybe it was his soft dark hair, or his perfect face, or his strong arms and chest, or maybe it was how nice he treated her. She guesses she always had loved him, even though she didn’t realize it until last year.
Jo agrees to go to a party to protect his sister. he is alpha, its the right thing to do. what he didnt know is that he was actually going to be protecting her best friend, mel. nor did he think this young human girl would be his mate.
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I agree with, @Silent_hill This is really good. I like it :) Voted and added to my Library :)
The one thing that put me off was how you repeated perfect too many times O.o Other then that it is probably the first werewolf story that I actually like :D
I'm really liking your story. I love how everything starts off. Your book just seems to flow. The flashback was equally great.
Hey! I was lol when you said sigh, haha XD Also, I like the idea of a flashback :) Great try :) Good luck with the rest of the story!
This is a cool story, but you need to slow it down JUST a bit. It's a nice start though!
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| Name | Maddi |
| Location | Wonderland |
| Member Since | May 25, 2012 |
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