Whenever I read your poems, I always feel like you've looked inside of me before. I can completely relate to this feeling of utter loneliness and loss. Nice.
Love it! It perfectly captures the gambling scene! Just one thing, it's four leaf clovers that are considered lucky, not three leaf :)
Would you believe i just sang this out loud !. It has a good ring to it. Its a good poem , Keep writing and never stop dreaming :D
how do u write such amazing poems?!?! =) as usual this poem is truly epic =) all your poems are =)
This is nice but way too short.
You haven't posted in a while, so this is better than nothing x)
I think it portrays exactly what life is, a game where you have to depend on your self, but it doesn't mean you can't enjoy it while it lasts.
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