Mindscape

2 Part Story 3.7K Reads 156 Votes
TheOrangutan By TheOrangutan Updated 2 years ago
Science Fiction: In the future there is the City. A hedonistic world where humankind's every whim and need is catered for by the Mind, the super computer that controls every aspect of day to day life. The human mind is a far more complex thing than even the Mind can anticipate though. What happens when the human mind evolves to a point far beyond what is considered 'normal'? What happens if the elements themselves are bent to the whim of one man who has lost everything he cares for? Love. Logic. Reality. Which is more real?
Lauleen_Multani Lauleen_Multani a year ago
so creepy I'm listening the music playlist for random shuffle
MayaMayhem MayaMayhem 2 years ago
I liked it, it was kind of cheddar, :/. but i'd give it 4 stars out of five. ;)
Amuse-bouche Amuse-bouche 2 years ago
I've only just read the first part of this highly original and fascinating story as yet, I am intrigued, and cannot wait to find out where you will lead us in this futuristic scape of vast imaginings! Really have enjoyed this write!
EricaEmery EricaEmery 2 years ago
@TheOrangutan No worries, i just thought I'd let you know how your work made me feel hehe. I hope you win! :D
EricaEmery EricaEmery 2 years ago
@TheOrangutan Wow this is absolutely spectacular, the way you write encapsulates the mind and drew me in so easily. I was like a moth to the flame. Simply brilliant! :)
XxIamAfannerxX XxIamAfannerxX 3 years ago
@TheOrangutan Is the part 2 already published? If so, send me the link!