Man that was great writing But horrible at the same time I almost cried cuz that was so powerful T-T You are so good at this Keep up the good work
Though this made me sad, I can't deny the fact that this is nicely penned. Good job.
Oh, my... It's so... sad (Wow! I think I almost cried (I usually never cry - aka not emotional))
Excellent way of showing how suicide effects those around you, whether you think it will or not. Excellent story :)
i think you showed perfectly how suicide effects others not just the person who commited it. :)
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