Good story, I really liked it. You know how to draw a reader in BUT I think you need to break up your paragraphs a bit better.
When I read your description, I was immediately intrigued by the story! I love it already. This story is going to be in my library! Keep it up! :D
Oh love the clover cover!! haha. <--Look. About your story. I love the starting paragraph.
This is a great way to kick off a story. I love Emma Stone and you did a pretty great job of condensing everything into a prologue. :) Great job!
Emma Stone is absolutely stunning! I love her! <3 Awesome and very realistic story. Lovin' it! #voted
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