Climax
(IN THE PROCESS OF EDITING) On the day of their wedding, Suze begins to be feeling doubts on her and Stanley getting married. She starts to bring back the past of cancelled wedding days, and betrayals. Will Stanley be able to change Suze's mind before it's too late? Even after the wedding, they are both still at the climax of their relationship when past and future problems come along. Suze has to choose if she wants to keep the commitment or break it.
But if Suze chooses to break it, will Stanley stop her? Or will he let his love run away from what they had together?
Find out in Climax.
*Inspired by Usher's song, "Climax".
Recent Comments
ChelciaGordon
Also, "Don't let the past ruin the present," is a GREAT line. I really like that. Nice writing!
You can really understand the characters, and you did a good job of making sure the reader can feel for the characters. This is really good.
A great beginning, and I will definitely read more soon! The emotion is very well conveyed. :3
I saw a few corrections that you mioght need to make with capitalization, punctuation, and spelling and grammar. Otherwise it was pretty good! *voted*
You're so close to your goal! :) You have some really nice details and a great writting style, btw!
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