Don't die on me...

Angela's world crashes down when her mother became ill, she's never been so lost and alone in her life. But then Lucas - who is doing his Community Service in their house – decides to help her through the hard time. Angela let him through her walls and prays for her mother not to die on her. However she’s too busy to wonder why Lucas is really helping her and what he’s planning to do …
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Oooh, cool start. Short. Simple.Poetic.  Nice description, too. Looking forward to reading the rest.
Awwww,expressed grief very well, I totally could relate n feel if my mom was illsooooo woot woot,  voted!
I like it, its really good and I can imagine everything *VOTED*

its good. it mad eme read all of them but i liked this one the best, for sure because it showed alot of emotion to me.
Its plain and simple to the point I can comepletely understand! I already like Angela! *Votes and is off to continue reading*
I agree with Carebear15 you definitely know how to describe things very well and portray exactly what the character is feeling. you have my vote. :D

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Name Sima H
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