your story is really good! i love how u end with a cliff hanger when i really wanna know what happens ;oo
Don't need to put words in caps to make a point, add more details, and I didn't see any mistakes.
i liked how you started your story... it's very interesting...^^ paranoid... voted!
AMAZING job. I love the descriptions and the cover (btw). I love the cliffhanger! Now I want to know more!
@vampluvergurl98 lol that's so cute tho!! You're soo awesome for making her name Anira!! <3 Can't wait to read the next chapter and sorry for late reply lol :P
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