This a very good poem it makes me cry a little. People should stop bullying and get a life
@NocteLamia101 YOU ARE AMAZING! I wish I could write half as good as you! You are a natural! Your poems are amazing! Keep writing!
I feel sad now. I'm gonna go drown my sorrows in Ice Cream. Then I'll probably read it again.
wow! did you hear that (whisper) that was the sound of you blowing my mind! (shout)
Its nice and I like that second last stanza, but you should try to make the poem more in-depth and write more about your feelings!
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