@RayneLovesBlakk Don't just read the story, understand it. Then, I'm sure you will be able to understand this prologue too.
@RayneLovesBlakk if you can understand a story well, then only you become a good reader. So, i don't think my prologue was at all confusing.
I don't really like the teacher-student relationship thing either, so I'm not really into this :S Sorry!
Its really good but there are small grammar mistakes but nothing too big. The start was casual yet interesting :) Good job!
I think this a really good start! I mean people below have already commented the small mistakes but overall it was good. :)
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| Name | What's in a name? |
| Location | Hell |
| Birthday | Apr 20 |
| Member Since | Dec 04, 2010 |
| Votes Received | 910 |