Emma *Wattpad Version*

100 Part Story 18.3K Reads 592 Votes
Augustyne By Augustyne Completed
*Currently Editing* 

Emma was just an average ordinary girl, or so she is led to believe.  One day Emma is caught in a web, and needs to find out what this all really means. She  looks for and turns to those close at hand only to be challenged.  Even by her own best friend! She knows naught what lies ahead but she will try and figure it out before it's too late. Will she be able to change the world or will the truth change her?
europia europia 2 years ago
be sure to capitalize the beginnings of sentences :) otherwise, it was written pretty well and it was interesting :) and i agree, i love the cover! it kinda fits the story's voice i guess haha idk.
Alaina_Boo_Boo Alaina_Boo_Boo 2 years ago
Hey! So I read it and I loved it! Soooo intriguing!! Girlfriend you have some skills!! I understand about the not editing thing- I do the same and yeah you had a few comma mistakes but otherwise you were golden!! I liked the third person as well :)
I like it. Some more detail maybe? Camatose Dreaming http://www.wattpad.com/story/1750127-alter-ego
Butterflyqueen Butterflyqueen 3 years ago
Your story is in the 3rd person pronoun? I like d 3rd person pronoun so baby dont change it bcuz i LUV it. Voted and off to d next chapter.
IrisCaterman IrisCaterman 3 years ago
so interesting, you have great writing skills, and im looking forward to reading the next chapter
04butterfly13 04butterfly13 3 years ago
Good start with the story, but i felt like it sort of lacked detail which made it a little boring. Add some more details and fix some grammar mistakes and it would be really good!