I like it. Some more detail maybe? Camatose Dreaming http://www.wattpad.com/story/1750127-alter-ego
Your story is in the 3rd person pronoun? I like d 3rd person pronoun so baby dont change it bcuz i LUV it. Voted and off to d next chapter.
so interesting, you have great writing skills, and im looking forward to reading the next chapter
you want a cover? http://www.wattpad.com/4702298-need-a-cover-i-got-you#comments
Add to your private library
My LibraryAdd this story to your public reading lists