@JustWaitinForYou And I love that you sorted a lot of the story out, It's a lot more easier to read and awesomer ;D
:O I LOVED ITTT!!! I wish Niall would share his pancakes with me... >_< maybe someday...lol :D
I have a suggestion: Make sure you spell out numbers. Other than that it was good! :)
Very interesting! I hope people vote and comment fast because I can't wait for the next chapter! It sounds really good!
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