I find Micah very cute :D I disagree with the comment below me. I like the descriptions just the way they are. O.O Did I just quote Bruno Mars?
I like your writing style! Your descriptions are great! I can imagine how the characters looks! Cool. :) Great!!
I suggest you make another paragraph everytime someone else talks :) Other than that, great job!
First of all I love your cover! And Aspen is an amazing character:) Can't wait to read more. Check out my story http://www.wattpad.com/6303949-project-baby
Good plot though I did catch a few spelling errors and I think a couple of grammer errors, but overall really good.
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