um...a little odd, but unique...it's not something i've ever seen before...it's good to try some new things...it's a great start though...keep working on it!
Awww that was so sad :'C. But i loved it! it's well written, i didn't find any mistakes and i love the way you just planned it out =) good job!
wow, so shocking and yet true..this makes me re-live the Bambi inccodent! lol even tho it was shocking, i like this very much. <3 TrishElainex
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