Awesome poem! you're very talented :) Please check out some of my works and leave a comment!!
Great piece! I could just picture the scene happening. By the way, I love your choice of words. Very profound. ;) Voted~
O: wow your vocabulary is amazing and... Wow! I could picture it right there! Amazing.
I love the way you described it and the rhythm. Can't even express how much I love this. great job!
This is A LOT better than the hungry one :) But still, your story was A LOT better than this XD
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