I love how you make us wonder what is going on and make us want to go to the next chap to read more
I love the flow of this! Not only can I seriously relate to this ("the only way to find yourself is to leave"), it's very intriguing!
I'm really impressed by the beginning so far ! You have really good grammar and this definately draws me in :) Reading on and a definite vote!
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