This is beautiful. My favorites lines were "Sorry to be seen...to be mean" Just lovely.
Wow, yeah, highly ironic! like the dialogue, and the ending finishes it excellently
I LOVED this, the last line is amazing! very emotional and very well written :) over all perfection!
Wow, this is a very effective poem. You touch on a very sensitive spot there, and manage to execute it very well.
You're an excellent poetry writer.
This poem is ... Wow.
Very deep, flowing with emotion, and just overall ... An amazing poem(:
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