Lost In The Proverbial Silence

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Breathing_Goodbye By Breathing_Goodbye Updated 2 years ago


HalfAwake HalfAwake 2 years ago
This is beautiful. My favorites lines were "Sorry to be seen...to be mean" Just lovely.
Urban_Light Urban_Light 2 years ago
Wow, yeah, highly ironic! like the dialogue, and the ending finishes it excellently
Rinneko Rinneko 2 years ago
@Breathing_Goodbye Tactful placement of irony is always effective :) Great expression of emotions that I envy always. I hope that you can vault over whatever troubles you encounter in life without falling too deep.
Thedevils_pen Thedevils_pen 2 years ago
I LOVED this, the last line is amazing! very emotional and very well written :) over all perfection!
Rinneko Rinneko 2 years ago
Great poem! It reminded me of all the addictions and regretted choices in my life. It's as if I'm the one with the bottle in my hands (which I am, in a different way). There was a sense of irony and a feeling of having given up (was it?) to me. Awesome :)
Rinen2 Rinen2 2 years ago
Can I refuse your choices..?
Is there a way for me to refuse them?