Wow, yeah, highly ironic! like the dialogue, and the ending finishes it excellently
I LOVED this, the last line is amazing! very emotional and very well written :) over all perfection!
Wow, this is a very effective poem. You touch on a very sensitive spot there, and manage to execute it very well. You're an excellent poetry writer. M x
This poem is ... Wow. Very deep, flowing with emotion, and just overall ... An amazing poem(:
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