This is such a nice poem to read. I like the warmth that it gives off and it's really nice to see how much you care about your friend. Great job!
This was so deep with a lot of emotion. I'm happy you and your friend made up. Keep up the amazing work ;)
You can really see the emotion behind the words. It's a very heartfelt piece of writing. Oh, and I'll glad you and your friend are friends again! :)
I really like this! How it kinda has a story element to it. It flows well and all :)
@Kuubat lol, I don't think every 17 year old does, just my bro. I'm 22 I feel old now. :P
@Kuubat :D IKR he is so annoying. I think it's sad he's 17 still acting like an idiot.
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