Journal of the Eldest
I have lived for almost six millenia. I have seen empires rise and fall but at least I have yet to fall. But when those I left to rule remember that I exist and I am more of a threat to them than any other thing in the world. What happens when the line is crossed.
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The descriptions in this chapter was ace, I could see it all happening and felt like I was right there, well done, voted!
This is a great start to your story! I like your writing style! It flows really well and your descriptions and dialogue are very natural. Keep it up :) voted.
eh, it's a little rough but that doesn't mean it's not amazing!! I really like it!! i voted!
Captivating! I love the action, it was a great way to hook me! And the concept is exceptionally interesting, hmm, may be reading more of this. :)
hey we have the same picture for our stories!=P I guess we're just awesome like that! =D
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This opening chapter is fantastic and your detail is impressive too! It's a very intriguing story and overall, a job well done! :{D